The bush Walk- By Caiden B
The trees were coated with
dry flaky, dark green moss. A pile of dirt lay on the ground like a monster waiting to be freed. Skyscraper trees blocked out the suns harsh rays. Tuis sang merrily and trees swayed in the breeze. Tree roots were like an old mans wrinkly fingers. Damp forest air was clinging to me like a baby koala. A filthy river as dark as night was flowing at a jogging pace. Trees surrounded me like I was in a cage. Bark was peeling off an old tree like paper.My stomach was jumping up and down like a kangaroo. Leaves were littered together like a sock. I thoughtI heard the trees whisper to me, "Come back soon..."
"Maybe," I muttered under my breath
I looked back at the stretch of trees as far as the eye could see and then dashed to my friends.
The bush- By Jamie G
The haunted place- By Keita
Plop, plop, plop, plop. I walked down the stairs of the trail. I smelt the peaceful smell of nature. I found a place to sit with Sunghyun. I thought it was a good spot, but...
"Eeaaaa!" Sunghyun shrieked. He had seen a cicada left on a sticky spider web dangling by its leg.
"Don't talk or move and get on with it!" shouted Mrs Millett.
"G...g...g...g we have to stay here," I whispered with a croaky voice.
"I guess so," replied Sunghyun in a scared voice.
I glanced around. I could see poisonous looking, vivid flowers. I imagined monsters lurking around haunting the witches castle. I saw branches with spiders webs making it scarier.
"Brrrrr... it's scary," commented Sunghyun."Yeah!" I agreed. I felt sick.
I could hear dogs barking, water running and machines banging and it only made me imagine more.
I imagined a cerbera (3 headed dog) edging towards me, or rocks falling...
I could only describe this place as haunted.
"Brrrrr..." I thought.
Nice writing Caiden, Jamie G, and Keita. that Nature walk was so fun. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDelete~ From Marina L
Wow a good piece of writing Caiden. I especially liked the bit when you described the tree. From Sunghyun
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Keita, Jamie G and Caiden.
ReplyDeleteNicole
WOW ! Great witting guys. Tamzin
ReplyDeleteare you sure the nature trail is haunted. Gina
ReplyDeletewow! those are some really good descriptive pieces of writing.
ReplyDeleteMaia Room 13
I mean WOW!
ReplyDeleteFrom Maia
i liked caidens awesome desricptive lauguage in his writing
ReplyDeleteFrom: Rico B
Good writing Keita,Jamie and Caiden. Dan
ReplyDeleteWow!!! I didn't think the same to Jamies.
ReplyDeleteBy Keita
Wow Keita I thought that the bush should be human friendly Robyn
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