Lunch With Granny narrative writing

Earlier in the term we were lucky to have Mr. Peter Millett do a writing workshop with us. He talked to us about making our stories more exciting. We brainstormed lots of ideas for exciting stories and eventually agreed that we needed to have an interesting human main character. After more brainstorming we decided (with a bit of persuading from Mr Millett), that a story about having lunch with Granny would be a good context. We all had fun writing our stories.  Here are some of them.

LUNCH WITH MILLIONAIRE GRANNY 

By Daniel W

Sam and granny were going to granny’s new house to have lunch together. They went there in the mini cooper that granny always drove her self . “Are we there yet, are we there yet?” whined Sam.

Finally they arrived at the mansion. Sam was surprised when he drove down the long neatly trimmed, gold plated driveway. When Sam finally saw grannies new house he ran inside .“WOW!” Sam howled. “How did you afford this granny?” asked Sam.

“ Well when your grandad died he appeared to have some kind of jewel that is extremely rare,” she said.

Sam took a tour of the huge mansion. It had 47 bed rooms with a 24 inch tvs in each and a bathroom each. There was a pool and snooker room and a really big pool. In the garage there was 23 cars all red because red is known as fast.

Then Sam got to the lunch table “WOW this is giant table” Sam screamed.

“ Come my young one it is lunchtime” warbled granny.

In the middle of lunch there was a loud BANG!

“Get down!” granny yelled. It was a masked robber so they didn’t know who it was.“They probably want the jewel” shouted granny.

But then granny pushed a button on her walking stick and electronically controlled cage dropped on top the masked robber.

Sam was very impressed and hoped he could see granny every Sunday.

Lunch with Spy granny   By Selene W

It was another rainy day with all the lightning and thunder storm. Me and granny were having tea in the living room.  

Suddenly I heard a rattling sound, a creepy one.

“Uh!” I sighed and walked into the kitchen where I saw a key and it was a weird one, It had a smiley face on shaped like a monkey.

“Granny?” I asked, “are these your keys?”

“Um.......um..., No actually,” she murmured, as if she was thinking of something else.

“TELL ME!” I screamed in a funny way.

“Fine,” she whispered. “Follow me with your lightest steps”. 
She looked around and began to walk.  I followed her. . . .Crackle Crackle.

“Now don’t tell anyone cause this is my deepest secret.” 
Behind the curtain of a long door granny took the key and then she smacked the key in the door hole. A tingle of scarness came down my spine and neck .

The door screeched it sounded like a cat getting angrier and angrier. “Come on honey,” she called in a loud whisper. I went in. It was brighter than I thought and we had to wear special glasses.

“Have you ever thought of being a spy?”  Granny asked me suddenly.

“Seriously! I would love to!” I thought. “but. . . I can’t...”  I said. “Why do we have to wear these glasses? I added. “Because darling,” granny thought.... I love them!”

She slowly opened the door and in front of me was my very own spy gadget set.

“THANK YOU so much gran, You’re the best!”

Lunch With Shark fishing Gran By Mitchell White

“Hey Gran I say should we head in now its getting quite rough and dark out here plus there’s no more food left ’’

“Of course theres no food left,” granny replied, “I only packed two sandwiches and a couple of drinks’’ in a mean hearted voice.

I turned away to stare at the big blue ocean but unfortunately I was staring at it grimmly. The waves came up against each other and then went back down. Abruptly, I hear my gran mutter to herself excitedly then I hear a bang up against the side of the boat.

Suddenly, I saw 2 dozen dorsal fins come up to the boat and go round to my grans side. I crept up to the side of the boat to where my gran was and then that’s when I didn’t believe my eyes. I saw a shark latching onto my Grans hand.

I gave out a shriek. My gran turned round to see me screaming like a girl. Instantly she smacked the shark in the head, and put herself in a position where she tried to look like nothing had happened.

I opened my mouth and I screamed to my gran, “GRAN YOU HUNT SHARKS!!"

           

“NO I DON’T , look at me I’m just chilling!“

“Yeah sure, I so believe you!“ I replied in a sarcastic voice.

“ I’M BEING HONEST I SWEAR“ Gran replied desperately in a cause to defend herself.

“Well I’ll give you some evidence,” I said to her, “You’re talking sarcastically and you’re acting weirdly, so yeah I think you are a shark hunter!“ I ended with a sly grin.

Then granny she told me the whole story about how she had lost her hand, and why she’s got tattoos and spiky hair. Just then we got a phone call.

“You should answer it,” Gran said, “its probably your mum seeing where you are.“

“Okay“, I replied casually. I meandered over to my grans mobile phone I answered it. 

“YELLOW!“

“What the... shark catcher gran is that you “

“No, its not shark catcher granny but um... GGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN come here theres someone on the phone for you,” I called.          

Gran rushed over like a cheetah, “Hello, hello“ she cackled excitedly.

“Shark catcher gran there’s the biggest great white shark man had ever seen. Get here quick!"

With that we were off. As we headed off, I said to gran “I think I’ll come for lunch with you again gran!"

Persuasive writing

In Room 20 we have been learning about how to persuade others by writing arguments. For our first argument we read, "The true story of the 3 little pigs", by Alexander T Wolf. Then we wrote an argument to persuade you, our audience that the Big, bad wolf was not guilty of killing the little pigs. Here are some of our arguments.

Alexander  T Wolf Is Not Guilty. By Sherise N

Alexander T Wolf is not guilty because you haven’t even heard his side. How could you believe or have heard the pigs story if they're dead and Alexander didn’t kill them thats all wrong- HE WAS FRAMED!!! He sneezed, their houses fell down and they died. So he ate them. My point is the wolf didn’t want to waste a good dinner. Also, it's not his fault that he eats meat, he’s a carnivore  and if you eat ham shouldn’t you be considered bid and bad too. Another point is that the police were pigs and so of course they’d favour the pigs side.

My first reason why Alexander shouldn’t go to jail is that we all know what kind of diet wolves have. It’s not their fault that they eat cute little things like bunnies, pigs, puppies, kittens. I mean if cheeseburgers were alive and cute you would be big and bad. If you think of it that way it makes you feel bad (Just like Alexander here). Also if everyone started saying look it’s the big bad human you would feel bad right? Thats one reason why Alexander should not be put in jail.

Some believe that Alexander here is a big bad wolf but the story I’m about to tell you proves them wrong. Now, Firstly the whole thing was about a cup of sugar and Alexander' s granny. You see Alexander was making a birthday cake for his granny when he ran out of sugar,(and had a really bad cold) so he went to the first pigs house and knocked on the door, (and yes he didn’t want to be rude so he knocked) and well the whole door fell right in. It wasn’t Alexanders fault the door feel in, the house was made of straw. So Alexander was about to leave but he felt a sneeze coming on and sneezed a big sneeze and you know what the whole straw house fell in and guess what right in the middle was the first pig HE WAS HOME THE WHOLE TIME!!! so Alexander couldn’t waste a good dinner (and he was dead as a door knob) so he ate the little porker, the same thing happened at the second pigs house. Those pigs are real porkers!!!!! Now they should be the ones in jail!!!!     

Now in my opinion you shouldn’t put Alexander in jail because now as you can see Alexander is a very kind, polite, peaceful and someone who really really really loves his granny. Therefore Alexander would do anything to help his granny or in this case do anything (kill) to someone who insults his dear old (very old) granny. So now Alexander still needed a cup of sugar so of course Alexander went to the third pigs house. Now, it took Alexander a long time to get to the third pigs house because he had two helpings of raw pork so Alexander eventually got there puffed and out of breath. He knocked on the door and tried to say loudly (but failed miserably) little pig (taking a big breath) are you in, well the violent little guy say BUZZ OFF and well that pig had no manners whatsoever. Next he screamed at the top of his piggy lungs AND YOUR GRANDMA CAN SIT ON A PIN!!!! Now that made Alexander mad, so by the time the police and reporters (which were all pigs) Alexanders was making a big fuss for them to see. So the police (pigs) thought that the cup of sugar story was boring and made up the big bad wolf thing. Thats another reason why Alexander should not go to jail.

Now for these three reasons I have given you, you shouldn’t put Alexander in jail because the whole BIG BAD WOLF stuff is fake. I declare that my client should be free and claimed NOT GUILTY. One more reason why Alexander should not go to jail he Alexander t wolf did not do anything wrong.       

Alexander T wolf is innocent! By Vasti V

Alexander T. Wolf is not guilty. I will prove that the wolf is innocent . There is no more time to waste let’s get on to it .

The wolf is not guilty because he didn’t have a motive to eat those pigs. You can’t blame him just because he is a carnivore, look at these humans they  eat animals. Why don’t you put them in jail?

Secondly,  all the wolf wanted was a cup of sugar so he could make a cake for his grandma. He went for a walk  and saw some houses and remember he only wanted a cup of sugar. He walked up to the first house. Also he had a cold. The first house was made out of straw. The minute he knocked on the door it fell in -he asked is anybody home?. And he felt a sneeze come on. The sneeze came closer and closer and that sneeze came flying out of the nose. The house fell in just as the door did. He saw a perfect little pig  just lying there. He did not waste the perfect ham dinner, no he ate it. Is that so bad?

The wolf is not guilty because that’s what he did with all the the other pigs too. He did not have a plan behind it so he should not go to jail.

In conclusion, here are the facts:

1. The wolf only wanted a cup of sugar.
2. He is a carnivore and you can’t expect him to eat plants.

3. The house where poorly built and the pigs were already dead when he ate them.

The Big bad wolf is not guilty and he should not go to jail.