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Thursday, May 8, 2014

Autumn poetry

This week we came back to school to find that autumn had arrived. Some of our trees had turned from green to gold and the temperature had dropped too. On Monday we spent some time out in the grounds looking at the trees and writing poems about the things we could see, hear and feel.

Here are some of our beautiful autumn poems.

Autumn leaves- By Marina L
Autumn leaves falling from naked trees.
Sand yellow leaves falling onto soft fresh grass
Bony old trees bending in the wind
Rustling from withered claw-like leaves
The out of place tree has leaves with diseases
The smell of cinnamon comes from the shrivelled up leaves
Behind me stands the lush green everlasting trees
Autumn, autumn has come to stay
And leaves fall to the ground
Autumn, autumn has come to stay.

Autumn- By Dan T
Falling yellow leaves from fishing rod trees
The tree is feeling alone from inside to the bone
It is sad and scared
It's friends are gone
But it has to wait until spring is here.

The autumn leaf - By Millie C
The wind lifts me from my feet
My favourite friend has gone
My crispy shell and scaly patterns are so cold
Although the sun gazes at me still
I fall onto the lazy green pieces of grass
Suddenly I see a foot and then I know a beast was upon me
Autumn.

Autumn leaves- By Tamzin H
The autumn sun shines down on me
Burning my shell to a crisp
I let go of the branch I stand on,
and dance down to my old friends
The wind lifts us off the forest floor
The bees fly past humming to their nests,
A drop of rain comes hurtling down towards me

and throws me to the ground.

10 comments:

  1. Great Autumn writing. I really like the rhythm in your poem Dan. From Amie

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  2. I liked your poem too Dan- it captured what Autumn is about. Great poems from everyone else too! Sarah Thorpe

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  3. That was fun writing those poems.
    From Marina

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  4. Great writing. I like the repetition in yours Marina.
    Nicoole

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  5. Good poems Marina, Dan, Millie and Tamzin . Gina

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  6. I loved your autumn poems. I like your personification, Tamzin. The rhythm in you your poem is so cool, Dan! I think it's funny how you made a persons foot a beast, Millie. Marina, I like how you said the leaves had diseases.
    Grace

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  7. Thanks Mrs Millet for letting us write our own poem it's a good skill.
    Maia

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  8. What a nice piece of poetry. From Sunghyun

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  9. Wow! a nice piece of poem. From Sunghyun

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  10. Wow that is some amazing poetry Marina Dan Millie and Tamzin from Robyn

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