The bush Walk- By Caiden B
The trees were coated with

My stomach was jumping up and down like a kangaroo. Leaves were littered together like a sock. I thoughtI heard the trees whisper to me, "Come back soon..."
"Maybe," I muttered under my breath
I looked back at the stretch of trees as far as the eye could see and then dashed to my friends.
The bush- By Jamie G
The haunted place- By Keita
Plop, plop, plop, plop. I walked down the stairs of the trail. I smelt the peaceful smell of nature. I found a place to sit with Sunghyun. I thought it was a good spot, but...
"Eeaaaa!" Sunghyun shrieked. He had seen a cicada left on a sticky spider web dangling by its leg.
"Don't talk or move and get on with it!" shouted Mrs Millett.
"G...g...g...g we have to stay here," I whispered with a croaky voice.
"I guess so," replied Sunghyun in a scared voice.
I glanced around. I could see poisonous looking, vivid flowers. I imagined monsters lurking around haunting the witches castle. I saw branches with spiders webs making it scarier.

"Yeah!" I agreed. I felt sick.
I could hear dogs barking, water running and machines banging and it only made me imagine more.
I imagined a cerbera (3 headed dog) edging towards me, or rocks falling...
I could only describe this place as haunted.
"Brrrrr..." I thought.
Nice writing Caiden, Jamie G, and Keita. that Nature walk was so fun. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDelete~ From Marina L
Wow a good piece of writing Caiden. I especially liked the bit when you described the tree. From Sunghyun
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Keita, Jamie G and Caiden.
ReplyDeleteNicole
WOW ! Great witting guys. Tamzin
ReplyDeleteare you sure the nature trail is haunted. Gina
ReplyDeletewow! those are some really good descriptive pieces of writing.
ReplyDeleteMaia Room 13
I mean WOW!
ReplyDeleteFrom Maia
i liked caidens awesome desricptive lauguage in his writing
ReplyDeleteFrom: Rico B
Good writing Keita,Jamie and Caiden. Dan
ReplyDeleteWow!!! I didn't think the same to Jamies.
ReplyDeleteBy Keita
Wow Keita I thought that the bush should be human friendly Robyn
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